Justin Groft
20 years ago
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i think i critiqued a new me, which ended up being an excellent poem. My only qualm about your writing, is everyone i read (i read the four on the top of the list, wether thats recent or featured, i dont remember) is they all had a very similar subject, and a very apparent one, and they all used the same scheme. Maybe mix it up a bit. Youre very good at what youve done, but youll never grow until you fall. |
midnight♥lullibys
20 years ago
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alight will do...please read |
blackrose1011
20 years ago
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all i want is honesty (and a spell check) but yeah honesty works for now (and yes i am awear that there is one when you post! however i am to lazy to use it) I will check your poems out too! i do check out the ppl whom comment on mine! |
Katrina Boblina
20 years ago
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hey can you look at any of my poems? i dont care wich ones |