please read my poems and tell me what ya think

hey everyone i was just wonderin if you would read my poems and tell me how i could improve. and tell me what ia m doing right

you have good poems, I like 'em, but here's a tip write your poems in a poetic style like this;

When you left me
I sat myself down
and tried thinking of why
you broke up with me.

But I couldn't think of a reason why.
But all I know is that i am gonna keep on loving you cause its the only thing i wanna do i don't

***Hoped I help :) **** Good luck! I'll check in with your new poems when you add em