'If I ever'

Please can you read this and give me some comments on how to improve, and vote? I'd really appreciate it. Thanks in advance
sarahxxxx

hehe I forgot to write the whole 'I'll return the favour n sh*t' haha. xxx

Okies dokes...read it...WONDERFUL!! :)

Seriously...you don't need to improve it. It's perfect.

Done! I didn't see where you needed to change a thing! Would you please take a look at any of my featured poems! Maybe not my lastest one it's not that good! Thanx I appreciate it!

Thanks for the comments! Oh yeah, and I got rid of the commas :) xxx

Hey.. well im going to go read it now. It doesnt matter which one you read.