I hate to do this,but....Poem critique swap...

heres the deal, I do not really want votes,although you can vote on mine if you feel it deserves it...

I am looking for constructive critique/critisism,any advice to help my writing experience expand....

I will critique to my best ability as many poems as you have to my set.

thank you,
-steve

read steve's work people...tis good!

I'll try but I'm not the best at critiquing. but honest answers are the best answers and I always give honest answers.

Sure I'll look at yours Please Look at my Featured poems and A letter to Mom. Please and Thanks
Love Always
Allison