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I worte this poem, and though its ovious what its about, i dont know what to call it, could you all read it and give me some sugestions? Tell me what you think of it too, its my worst in my opinon, its just so... you'll get it when you read it...

thanks

i'm trying to read your poem, but it keeps saying "fatal error" so....*shrugs* sorry dear. maybe it'll work later.

it should be working fine...i just tried it...