A new poem

I just recently thought of a poem and I'd like it if I could have some feedback.
It's called "That (was the) day"

And I'd also appreciate it if more people would read the first poem I submitted.

Of course, I'll read and comment yours, too!

Sure~ Would you please read any of my featured poems that you choose. Thanx I appreciate it!

sure n/p i already did it!! could you please read my newest poem and 2 of my featured poems? they arnt that long so dont worry it wont take long