Waiting

This is a poem I wrote and it doesn't rhyme, it's the second one I have written that doesn't rhyme so I would really like to know what you think.

Waiting

By Lydia

Falling endlessly,
Into a pit of darkness, to a place,
Where there are only things lost,
Nothing ever being found,

Time passing,
Ticking by slowly,
But it seems the end,
Is to far away,

So I'll have to wait,

Wait endlessly,
Until time passes,
Passes by,
Passes through,

I'm waiting until it passes me,
It might be a while,
But it'll be worth the wait,
I dont' mind waiting,

But to pass the time,
I'll think,
Think about my past,
And what I have done,

I'll think about my present,
What's happening now,
I'll think about the future,
What lies ahead,

In the dark,
Waiting to be seen,
Waiting to be found,
But because of where I am,

It can't be found,

My future never known,
Unless I go back,
But I don't know where that it,
Plus I like it here,

Not quite heaven,
Not quite hell,
A place with just emptyness,
A place I have found.

-Lyd

Thanks

Anyone....

I'll just sit here being lonely I guess...

-Lyd

I like it...it doesn't need rhyming...it still seemed to flow well...I especially like the last stanza.

"Is to far away"

*too

Well done. :)

Why thankyou, anyone else.....

-Lyd