Should i continue with the Series?

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=382221

That is a link to a poem i did, i want to know what you all think, i will look at the comments and i will judge if i am going to post the second one like today or tomorrow, so any input is appreciated, i always try to comment/vote back to the person who has done it for me.

Thank you so much ahead of time,

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You absolutely should! Please do post it :)

xxx