Enslavement has another poem=)

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    Actually, there are two=)

    ("On the Meadow of Silence" and
    "The Dawn of Truth")

    I do not get too many comments nowadays, but the few that I get means alot to me..

    So I was wondering if anyone would care to read them and give me a thorough comment...I will certainly pay them back with the same effort...

    Thank you very much=)

    peace

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    sure! i'm on it!

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    i read your silence meadow one! it was great!

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    =)

  • ღ*KiM*ღ
    20 years ago

    I commented on both poems you have asked Enslavement, I hope my critique is exactly that - a critique, not a comment.

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    indeed they are=)

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    i read some more of yours! you're a really good poet! keep up the good work!