SICK OF THIS!!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    go friendship under lisa and talk to me!
    and you travis if you ever show your face cause your dead for given me a good poem!!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Im sorry lol i won't kill you give me another one please :D*angelic smile*

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    I got to go, but leave the poem here :D

    xxx

  • Synyster
    20 years ago

    I rated and commented on almost all of your poems up through (I think) August 2nd. Pretty good, Travis. You have some serious talent.

    XxX))Eclipse((XxX

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    im back!

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    wow, alot has happened since i was last on, lol well if you could do either "dwelling love" or "tears of stars (not sky, stars, lol this time) so ya, haha i'll defniately repay the 11 HELPFUL comments! lol thanks a tun eclipse!! yours really helped!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    What poem this time travis? lol

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Im taking a random, maybe il have luck, haha take a old one:D

    could you take a random to?

    :D

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    lol sure! try my dwelling for love, i think that one needs help! and tears of stars, newayz i'm on to it!!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    I randomly picked :D
    AND I made a comment :D
    Ill do the other to tomorrow :D
    me be tired now :( the four days of all nighters are catching up on me :|

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    *sticks tounge out* i gotta make a comment!!!!!!!!
    :D liffe is just peachy, who am i kidding :D me be so hyper now? i change fast :D

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    lol wow, i'll get some on you tomorrow, right now i'm sorta not in the mood...

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Hey, im gonna do your newest one :D

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    And some more im bored :D

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    And you do "I hate you" for me, I was angry while writing it so I don't really like it, its too angry I think :|

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    YES I FOUND ANOTHER ONE HAHAHAHA IM WINNING
    and another which was great but needed help.
    :D

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Drop a message when your on :D

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    Kayla- Hey there!! ya i've been meanin to talk to ya but when i'm on you're not on! geeze, lol well i hope softball keeps up your spirits! newayz hope to hear from ya soon!

    lisa- haha i wasn't on yesterday, i was TOOOO busy, my older ones suck, you can do all those, lol, i dont know how they are as high as they are, and ya, lol all the poems except newly found is about brandy so ya....i'm in love again, lol ..with her...uhh newayz hope ot hear from ya soon!

  • themeuneverseen
    20 years ago

    I will on one of yours and could you please do the same for my new poem called Now That Your Gone

    Please and thanks you!
    ~*hAiLy*~

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    Alright sounds good!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    CRAP, when Im not on you are, and that wasnt funny on my poem it scared me lol im sorry...Il get on more when able lol

  • Stacinator
    20 years ago

    I commented on 2 of your poems :)
    If you could, can you comment/rate my 2 latest?
    Thanks.

    Ps...You have great writing skills :)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    I know dosn't he!
    Stupid Travis lol

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    lol hate me all you want, you might see a bit more soon, lol i'm so loved here, poor lil me, haha.

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    :|

    New ones? But I don't see lil red numbers?

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Found my lil red number :D

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    do my poem love? please :D

    post 69 :D

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    haha alright!!

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    found your lil red number, eh?

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    haha, hey ok this is what we're ganna do, we are going to move this topic from SICK OF THIS into "constructive poetry" so start postin there!!!