HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

people out there help me plz see i have been writting for a while now and i want to know the truth about my writting. I can take any critisisim good or bad so plz be honest about my work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

No Problem, I Think This May Be The Wrong Forum To Ask Someone To Read Your Work, But I Must Say From What I've Read From Your Poetry Isn't Bad, I Just Found Multiple Spelling Mistakes And Inccorect Format That Really Messed Up The Poems Brilliant Flow I Still Gave You 5.0's, After All The Poems Were Good But Theres Room For Improvement xoxo-Nikki-xoxo