Poetry Challenge part 6: Tetractys

I hope this challenge hasn't been done already. Anyway, let's write tetracyts!

TETRACTYS

Tetractys should express a complete thought, profound
or comic, witty or wise using 20 syllables. They can be
written with more than one verse but each subsequent
verse must invert the syllable count. There is no limit
to the number of verses. The structure is:

line 1 - 1 syllable
line 2 - 2 syllables
line 3 - 3 syllables
line 4 - 4 syllables
line 5 - 10 syllables

Love:
Could you
Be so kind
To please explain
What exactly do you have against me?

Okay, that's my attempt:)

line 1 - 1 syllable
line 2 - 2 syllables
line 3 - 3 syllables
line 4 - 4 syllables
line 5 - 10 syllables

This
is not
who I am.
This is you, dear
or whatever you wanted me to be.

blalbalblba...

another one..

Bird.
The Bird.
Kill the bird
You killed the bird.
and still you wonder why it doesn't fly..

crap

Enslavement I completely LOVED the last one. I don't know. I just really liked it, I didn't think it was crap at all.

I'm too tired and unintelligent right now to make my own.

Beads...
My ear...
I was four...
Clakity-clack
I haven't stuck a bead in my ear since

Ariana Aug. 20, 2005

Lmao...true story, too. :P

//Ari\\

Great work everyone! Fun and a little bit challenging. Keep them coming!

Oh, and broken inside the second line in your poem needs to have 2 syllables:)

Please
Open
Your eyes now
So much to see
You'll miss your opportunity at love

ok so maybe its not as good as the rest of yours lol but hey i gave it a try...what do you think? lol x)

LMAO

Bob, i thought the same thing...

//Ari\\

Trust
used to
be something
we could count on.
"Why me?" You were supposed to understand.

Mane
Chimane
Your Tetracty(s)
Should have ten counts of
Syllables in the last lines, not one more

//Ari\\

Here
We slay
Each other
With our words like
A rubber sword piercing the cyber realm

Ariana Aug. 20, 2005

//Ari\\

Wow!
Such words
In anger?
Clouded judgments
Debate, discussion, then an eruption

When
touching
the mirror,
the light i saw
you dancing softly upon my fingers

Bob,

Looks like I might be joining you in Hades! I've been put into the dog house today. So what, we will have a "Hot" party down there with the oldest dark poet of them all - Lucy!

Steve

Men
What do
They do wrong
To meet Hades
Forgive me, I am generalizing...

Ariana, Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

Bunched...
No hugs
Panties tight
They offend me
So pick it out of your crack, you tight stiffs

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

LMAO Just off the top of my head. :P

//Ari\\

I edited the last line....came up with something better lmao...

//Ari\\

Mane
Didn't
You read my
Advice to write
Proper Tetractys without additions??

Plus,
I shall
Never think
You're respectful when
You type out insults such as these online

Bob
Thank you
The invite
To Hell has been
Accepted well, but
Let's leave the bunched panties above the flames...

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

Bob's
Not the
Pervert here
Because really
YOU'RE bunching your panties up your crack

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

You go Sunny...lmao.

Roast,
Sunny
Roast the 'tude!
Not medium
But i'd prefer the disrespect grilled rare

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

Hell,
The fire,
Needs dousing,
Was ignited
By wails for prize
Sweeping those ashes with no dignity

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

LMAO

Coals
Down pants
OH MY GOD
Cannot sit down
And compose correct, complete sentences

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

Bob
Sometimes
You remind
Me of one of
Those demonic gremlins when you're laughing

(LMAO)

..Mock
Me like
I have you
Because it's not fair
For you to ignore your own burning bed

^Um...okay then. Lol.

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

Hm..
Funny
How a child
Like me can say
Loads through her words without being a brat

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

Lol...

//Ari\\

Thanks
Sunny
And I must
Take the pleasure
Of saying your smile widens my own grin

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

^_^

//Ari\\

LMAO

Love
Is here
In this thread
Let's all group hug
And remove the underwear from our cracks

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

Let's all just get alooong, people!! And just let yourself gooooooo...

LMAO..

//Ari\\

Snow
With doo
Dropped across
Santa's reindeer
End up replacing turkey Christmas Eve...

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

Alright these things are just popping into my head now lol...

//Ari\\

LMAO

What sets Bob and the Mods further apart?
That laugh,
Brains...
Which confirms...
Bob's a gremlin! :D

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

I'd
Rather
Not eat that
Mr. Gremlin
Bob Sir, there's enough fiber in my food...

...Then for me to go and gobble panties
And wait for
Santie Claus to
Bring me
More!

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

HAHAHAHAHHA Bob, you're right, i'm having too much fun lmao...

//Ari\\

Pet peeves
Of the Gremlin
Throw [them]
Away
For we're having so much fun here in Hell

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

RELEASE YOUR EMOTIONS!!!!! Don't let them ruin your day!! LMAO

//Ari\\

LMAO!!!

I love you both
You're crazy
Humor never ceases within your words
Which is
Kewl

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

Hahahaha "kewl" as Cartmen would say lmfao...

//Ari\\

((Bob and his Gremlin friend..))

Your cousin slash pet is staring at me
Strangely now...
It's hugging me
So
Awkward..

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

Sunny, would you like to buy a Gremlin?
If so,
Remember not
To wash it
Down

Or else it will reproduce with many
Furballs with
Bloodshot eyes and
Scaly
Ears...

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

Maybe if you wet your pants those coals from
Earlier
Wouldn't
Burn as much when
Pissed.

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

LMAO

//Ari\\

Don't get
Gremlin Bob wet
More will come
And
We will all be running for our short lives...

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

I am
The master
Of Tetractys
Composing is my game, and i'm winning
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

Oh dear
Sunny done gone and messed her pantaloons
Good thing her
Butt won't hurt much
Now

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

HAHAHAHA

//Ari\\

Gasp
I didn't see
That special date
When Bob
Graced us with his words, wisdom, and humor

Ariana Aug. 21, 2005

//Ari\\

Do my
Eyes deceive me??
Or is it true that i've read this sentence...
"BallNMatt
Stole [poems]????"

IT'S ALL LIIIIIIIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And i just thought he was an awesome poet!! Left and right his poems were in the highest ratings...he even won a contest!!

WHAT IS HAPPENING TO OUR CYBER SOCIETY????

//Ari\\