*will comment on whatever ones...*

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    Hello.
    I would appreciate if anyone would comment on my new poems (and any others). You may leave requests/lists even if you don't, but I'd really love some feedback.

    thank you,
    undying blusher
    xxxx

    p.s. Most of my recent posts are old, I had just started writing...so that's probably why they don't seem all that great...

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    kk. thank you.

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    Thank you two for the comments. I left you both a few comments...I'll try to do some more later, if you want.

    If anyone else answers this...if I don't get back to you right away, don't worry, I'll get to you before long.

    xxx

  • Kayla
    20 years ago

    can you comment on any of mine that you would like and for however many you do...ill return the favor...thanks in advance luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • SweetSuicide
    20 years ago

    sure ok ..

    peace

  • EJ
    20 years ago

    Hey can you read my newest poem and i'll check out yours?? thanks EJ

  • Katrina Boblina
    20 years ago

    hey can you comment on any of mine as you can?thank you, I'll check out yours in a while

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    Thank you all. If I don't get to you sometime tonight, it'll be tomorrow.

    thanks, really!

  • Wip lost the Rhythm
    20 years ago

    My Goldilocks
    My snow white

    if you could comment on those and any others of mine i'll comment back on yours comment for comment :)

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    okay, I'm back. I'll be working on everyone's now...probably take a while...

    :)

  • katie!
    20 years ago

    When you get the chance please look at my poem O' to be and leave an honest comment, I will return the favour as soon as I can, thank you..
    Oh good, the time happens to be now..

    *zooms off to read poem*
    xxx

  • katie!
    20 years ago

    Please could you also look at my two newest, thanks much appreciated.. enjoyed reading your poems..

    take care
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    thank you, katie. I'll see what I can do...I have some catching up to do though. I'll get to you as soon as I can...

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    I read your comments, and thanks so much, katie. I'll be honest and write as much as I can when I get to yours :)

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    From what I've read so far, amazing work, katie....

    If I miss anyone, let me know. I'm still working though...

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    I'm back, again, for a while....

    Thank you everyone.

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    I'm on now....anyone want comments?

  • **Just Her**
    20 years ago

    sure im in

    Goodbye My Friend
    and
    My Dear Angel

    thanks I'll go check out your work right away:)

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    Thank you very much, I'll get on yours now... :)

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    If anyone else has some requests, leave them, and I can get to them tomorrow ;)

    xxxxxx

  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    When all of us were still kids

    Ty. :) sure i will

    Please read it,its beautiful!

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    I read it and commented :) And left more comments for ya.

    I'm going to do more of Taylors.... :)

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    anyone else?

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    any poems for the sleepless one to read? hmmmm?

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Hi please read these:
    "My 2 Boyfriends"
    "My Dreamboy Dosen't Exist"
    "Eternal sunshine Of The Spotless Mind"

    please comment/vote.. Thanks a lot =D

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    okay. I have a little time now..

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    Give me some poems to read please....

    And any comments would be MUCH appreciated ;)

  • Melanie
    20 years ago

    cutting away the sadness
    nobody cares
    thanks alot

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    Done.

    Note: I'd rather not read poems dealing with cutting/blood, but I'll do so if you really want...