Enslavement will give HONEST feedback on poetry

Indeed he will...leave the title of one of your better poems here, and I will look at it as soon as I get the chance (may take some time).

If you would care to return the favor, it'd be greatly appriciated, but if you don't want to, don't...

and if you intend to pay me back with "5/5, eXcElLent hun", I'll kick you in the nuts....

=)

Remember, only one poem...and a good one...I don't want to waste my time on crappy poetry...

peace

or maybe he won't, I mean, since no one answers

i got two,.. danse macabre, which is more dark, and prismatic,.. which is more of a brighter type of poetry.. either one will do... its all up to you..

"Teacher with a Metaphor"....thanks much

--Lucy Loves Not

heya...can u check on "story of the ice princess" and see what mistakes i have made...or what changes would do good to it?...tnx a bunch:D

ok.. please read my poem "my dad: dead and gone forever" please comment/rate.. thanks a lot!

Please comment on O' to be thank you..

Please comment on ' Natures Embrace' if you have the time Enslavement!

-Lyd

You are like a rose?

I dunno....Yeah do that one :D

try my Lulliby of the Blue Siren if you havent.

I'm sorry people, I don't have the time to reach all of you...I'm leaving for Greece, and am at work now...

I'll try as soon as Iget the chance

When all of us were still kids

thanks...i kno u will luv it

i definatly will return the favor if u check out some of my featured poems

Blue rimmed gray
or any other poem