just edited a poem..please read

please read a poem i just edited...and i will definatly return the favor....please read "drowning in my own mistakes" it was on the top rated list for a while and its fairly short and wont take much of your time....i'll even take 2 poems to r.r.c if you'll just please do mine....

please please please? w/ an extra cherry on top??? i would really apreciate it!! i dont mind r.r.cing other ppl's poems!!! hell i'll through in a bonus

I just did:). check out any of mine please.