if you have read this

I'll Check It Out For You Ann :)

I Have No Problem Being Honest With a Friend, I Admire Your Work Anyway So I Don't Know If I Can Really Honestly Crtique Without Alot Of Compliments In It lol xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

This Part "It has left me here deserted,
Only remnant a hoarse throat." Through Me Off, The Poem Was Great And The Stanza Was Too I Think That Part Could Have Maybe Used Another Word, Or a Diffrent Word, To Sound Better.. Even Though The Stanza Already Speaks Brilliance xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow That Sounds So Much Better! *Hugs* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

nice poem