plz read my poem sadness behind everthing

if u do ill commetn 3 poems for u

alright i already read it..please read my 3 newest poems...and your poem was great cept for the very first stanza...flow was a little bit off....i hope you get more ppl to read it though...

sure! could you please r/r/c these three? Little Secrets, Five Seconds, and If Love's So Great... thnx