The best deal there ever was, and ever will be.

  • Drew Gold
    20 years ago

    lol grand introduction! anyway,.. ill comment on 1, and if i like, then more of your poems,.. iif you review one of mine "Dancer of the clearing," and if you'll be so kind as to read another one, "trap-door veil" I'll be much obliged.

    I will return the favor, for sure. and im talkin about real critiques that help,.. They shall be given as received.. thanx
    pZ

    ...maybe it wasnt really the best deal, but it's not bad for you or me.

  • Drew Gold
    20 years ago

    just post the poem names you want commented on, however many there are..

  • Blaine
    20 years ago

    Thank You

    please

  • Drew Gold
    20 years ago

    your post was pretty general and ill read one of yours, but if u could tell me why you like it, all that good stuff.. helpful stuff?

  • Vegetable
    20 years ago

    I read "Dancer of the Clearing", It was very good. Sadly I do not have time to comment on your second one in as much detail as i'd like to, but I look forward to reading it when I have more time. In the meantime could you read my latest poem "Charlotte's Rose" i'd Be very grateful-Thanks!

  • midnight♥lullibys
    20 years ago

    i'll get right on it. please read w/e one has the least votes..or comments..or w/e.....thx!!and if youdo read more of mine i'll read more of yours

  • Drew Gold
    20 years ago

    i've got everyone, as far as i know.. imma look at more..

    plus, anyone else who wants to join in is welcome..

  • themeuneverseen
    20 years ago

    I will one yours....please on my newest called I Do

    Please and thanks you!

  • crystal
    20 years ago

    i'll check out your poems for you. could you read "a single rose of red" and any others that you decide to.
    thanks
    crystal