NEW DARK POEM RIGHT HERE

please read my newest dark poem...called confusion? its really dumb i know and makes no sence but i'd like to make it make sence lol please critique it and i'll read TWO or yours thx!!

-.'.-erica-.'.-

i read you're poem. it was great. could you read mine "a reason to smile" and any other one you want. thanks
crystal

yea i will no problem