want HONEST, helpful comments?

  • Carmen
    20 years ago

    post here and i'll read any poem of yours that you want, and comment truthfully. also, if you could, it'd be nice if you could r/r/c any of my poesm you want. i'll read as many as you want, and itd be nice if you could return the favor.

  • Dave
    20 years ago

    I have just read rasted and commented on many of yours i love your writeing your style and please keep it up if you want to look at some of mine feel free ones im really looking for input on are untitled angels and animals and deadly slumber but if you could look at any would be cool thanks

  • Carmen
    20 years ago

    i have read the two you listed, and two more. you're poems are very nice, but very sad and emotional. thnks for commenting on mine.

    anyone else?

  • Drew Gold
    20 years ago

    ill take a look at some of your poems, as for mine,.. any featured ones will do..

  • Truest Lies
    20 years ago

    Hi, I'd be very pleased if you could find the time to read one of mine called Nighttime Seagull.
    Thanks a lot.

  • XxTeArSxX17
    20 years ago

    could you read

    have you ever though
    trail of tears
    strong
    and any other of my Featured poems
    you have my word that on any one of them you
    rate and comment i be sure to do the same now i am check out soem of yours

  • LadyPearl
    20 years ago

    Raven
    and any other poems you want

  • .
    20 years ago

    If you could read any of my poems that would be great...ill return the favor
    Thanks!

  • A Heart Losing Hope
    20 years ago

    Hello, if you wouldnt mind reading my poems (as many as you want hehe) minus That Special Plason and comment please, it means a lot to me

    thanks
    ~A Hopeful Heart~

  • Carmen
    20 years ago

    i just finished Drew and TeArS. i'll go check out the rest of your guys' tomorrow.

  • Renee
    20 years ago

    Why yes, I -do- want honest and helpful comments. On any and as many of my recent poems or featured as you want. and I will return with equally honest and helpful comments :-)

  • Carmen
    20 years ago

    i've finished Tara-kay's and elizabeth's poems. if you two could please check out any of my featured poems, that'd be great.

    now on to the others' poems....

  • crystal
    20 years ago

    could you check out some of my featured poems? i'll r/r/c on some of yours for you as well.
    thanks
    crystal

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    if you wish. whatever catches your eye.

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    I Still Love You

    Lonely Mind

    Emotional Pain

    Raindrops of the Heart

    Forgive or Forget

    (Thanks, I'll return the favour. And remember, I want an honest critique.=)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • Tiller
    20 years ago

    Goodbyes

    This place in my head

    Please read and comment..Ill return the favor
    Thank you

    Tyler Windish