Anyone need some poems commented/rated?

Um, really sorry James, but I commented on "Who when you first asked, then I decided to return so as to rate it, because I can't remember if I did at first, but I looked all around at your poems and....simply couldn't find it. I have no idea what happened. Did you erase it or something? I'm very sorry about that, I really do not know why its not there.

Good Writing!
beth

well.. i know honest comments are near impossible to come by nowadays, and votes are a dime a dozen, and never really honest opinions.. i dunno why im asking, but i get the feeling you're the kind of person to give an honest vote/comment.

if you have the time.. which noone ever does seem to have the time.. i would love it if you could comment/vote on my resubmitted poem, "you've made my life perfect", or any of my other poems.

to make things easy, here is a link
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=501023

thank you!

~chris

hi.. please check out my poems:

"Sorry I Kissed Your Sister"
"My 2 Boyfriends"
"I’m Not Like Other Daughters...I Cut Myself"

Please comment/vote it would mean so much to me.. I will return it if you want me to..
Hugs and thanks!

Hey there!!!
I'll check out as many as I can I will get round to you all
In the mean time check out some of mine anyone will do it's your choice whatever seems more appealing for you.
thanks alot
well done to everyone great stuff
take care
love KIRSTY xxxxxxxxx

Hey there my newest ones out now..."F**K Forever"......"Still-born Still-Loved".....and "Unfinished".....
I'd really be grateful if u Rated and Commented on them thanks a bunch u guys rock
take care
love KIRSTY

The way.

If you will please.

Thanks to all who have sent in titles. I am still free to check out many more, and pleased to do so.
So send in your latest/most beloved titles and I'll get right down to them!

Good Writing!
beth

Peanut Butter Is Love
Love For God

Thanks so much, i'll read some of yours.

"Ecstatic Tears"

"I Still Love You"

"Lonely Mind"

and

"Emotional Pain"

Thanks ahead of time Beth. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

congratulations to Atomic, who I discovered is a great poet, and please don't hesitate to send in your own poetry titles, I will be very honest in my comments, and usually answer the requests almost immediately!

Good Writing!
beth

Thanks Beth for the honour. I shall cherish your compliments. =)

You're not a bad writer yourself M'Dear. Very nicely done with so much emotions.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

please comment on "Too late" thank you

"Love at first sight"
"Why don't you have a heart?"
and
"Free at last"

If you want to read more, feel free.
Thanks ahead of time :D
~BJ~

hey there, BJ, I commented on the poems that you asked. I'd already commented on Free At Last before, so I dont suppose it would be fair to comment again. I'd just like to tell you that all the poems were very nice, and very sweet.

*A note to everyone is that I have to do some work in a fair where my parents have a stand (they're going to be selling vitamins and supplements for athletes, as well as promoting their gym) and Im going to be giving a hand, so I wont have very much time with the computer.
Im really sorry, but any requests are probably going to take a while to be answered,unless I get to them in the morning, but...Im kind of a late sleeper (sheepish look)

So...my apologies and I hope that you'll all be fine.
Oh, this fair lasts for five days, and Ill be back after that, so just have patients.

Good luck to all, and good writing!
beth

P.S. You've all been great friends, and very helpful.
If none of you mind, could you check out my new poems, or one of them...thanks.

Um... Hi.. well. I was wondering is anyone wants to read my new poem "Just The Game We Play". I need some honest feed back. I've never written a poem like this before and i just want to know what you think. So uh if you read it, i would comment and everything back. Thank You! ^_^

~Anthony

Hey... ive been trying to get some of my poems noticed to see if they are actually good or not, because me and my friend want to send them in to a big contest... but its really hard to get a good honest opinion, when no one takes the time out to read other ppls poems.. so can u please read my poem

Reckless Emotion
Silent

the eyes that saved me

Thanks!!

I have read these. Perhaps you could send in some more. As soon as I see the titles, the sooner I will be able to comment.

See ya!

Please will you read:
Because i thought.....
These days
Thanks

"What I cannot forgive..."
"The Fourth Month of My Life..."

I don't know if you have read those already or not, but if not, could you please? Thank you, hun.

bleeding heart

thanks

okay, that's done. and the good news is that I have finally finished the show where I had to help out, and hopefully now will be quicker at answering requests.

Good Writing!
beth

My Cruel Angel

Morbid Child, This is the house, my life, the white box and any others that catch your eye. thanks:)

I just posted a new one... called "The Behind The Mirror" I would really love if you read that one and gave me some criticism. Please and Thank you in advance.

~BJ~

hi elizabeth...thanks so much i think my poems have gathered some dust lately lol.... pick any of em you want they are all in neglect haha. thanks again.
mandie.

yup, mine are so liek neglected. Please rrc on them.

Sorry about that Meister but Im underage, and besides have no idea really how to comment on explicit poems. Perhaps you should ask an adult to read and rate for you.
Sorry again,
-beth
oh, and if you ever write something that isn't explicit let me know and I'll comment on it for you.

My older poems are neglected. I would be grateful if you commented on them.

Could you read my newest one " leaving imagination land"?? i would really really appreciate it and i'll return the favor.. thanks EJ

Still searching...

Okie, done those any others?

beth

Hi could you read my new poem, "The difference Between Rain And Tears" please? It would mean alot to me ^_^.

~Anthony

Winter is my Time

"Cigarettes and a Gray Scarf" and "Our Greatest Sin"

much appreciative,
Christa

Monday is falling like a rainbow...
Perception
Forgotten Indulgence
Too Far Gone

Sure, guys, I'm getting right down to it, and don't worry, I'll probably be here for a while yet, so don't hesitate in giving me some titles.

Good Writing!
beth

lizzy could u do "one love" & "only wish " for me pls ?

I've already done "one love" but I checked out "only wish" and it was great!

-beth