Wings

I wrote a new poem but i want people i dont know to tell me what they think. It would help alot if you could read and comment it. It is caled Wings. I just need honest feedback from a neutral source. Thanks ^_^

~Anthony

PS. I am a man of my word who will return the favor! ^_^

can u pls check "murder or suicide" , "each night" & "love is where u are"
i'll do more of your poems !

Hello. please comment or vote on my poems... if u comment on my poem, and tell me what poem u want commented or rated of yours, i will do the same back... i love hearing what ppl have to say! so please check my new one out "Reckless Emotion" and i will do yours too! love ya thanks

hello there I would be glad to read your poem wings and i will leave a honest comment. xox if you do comment on any could you please comment on my latest ones.
Ocean Breeze
OR
You I lack

thans so much off to read yours now.