poetry challange

I have a poetry challange for anyone who feels like doing it.. take a normal object, or occupation, and turn it into a dark poem.. for example I am working on one called "The toy Collector" sounds innocent enough.. but when its done you will all see

I want to! I'm really going to try and remember to do this...what fun...

*pees pants and hurries to lock the door*

//Ari\\

wow wonderful work you two... magnificant topics it had a wonderful effect... thanx for sharing them with us all

Secretary's Scheme

Secretary by day,
Torturer by night,

To everyone's dismay,
Blood was her delight,

Innocent on the outside,
Violence taking over her soul,

Darkness is what she had to
hide,
Oh so many names to enroll,

Sitting at the back of the
room,
Ignoring every call,

Running through her mind
was their doom,
She would slam them
against the wall,

When her sorting and job was
done,
She'd be ready and waiting for
them,

Would she use her knife or gun,
It'd all be done by 9 pm.

(Umm... i'm not very good at this..)

nice work

Lmao Ari, Nice =P The Ones Posted Here Are Soo Freakin Good! I Especially LOVED The Seamstress One. So Beautifully Written =) I Might Try And Accomplish Making One Of These...

*C i e r m a e* ,, ♥

woah that is soo kool..... you people are very creative... and yeah the steamstress is really good

Bob I really like your poem. I think it would make a great movie, if you've seen May possibly reminds me of that sort of thing, love it.

I finally finished mine.. I know it took a while but I'm pleased with the way it turned out.. its really long so I can't post it here but I will give you the link if you want to see it.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=539317

Marilou and the Angel

~ What are you doing?
I'm going to jump off this bridge.
~ Now why would you do that?
I hate my life.
~ What happened?
Everyone hates me.
~ I don't hate you.
You don't know me.
~ I know you.
Who are you?
~ Who do you think I am?
Are you an angel?
~ How did you know?
Your eyes are glowing.
~ Hold my hand let me help you.
I'm scared.
~ But I'm an angel you can trust me.
Your hand feels strange.
~ Does it?
You're holding me too tight!
~ I am?
Please let me go!
~But you want to die do you not?
No please I changed my mind!
~ You can't do that.
Where would you take me?
~ To hell.

very interesting poem I loved it.. it just renforced my idea that not everything is good and even the best things out there are capable of bad deeds sometimes

no im not.. I got this idea from a website and I figured I would share it with everyone and see what they come up with.. but I don't blame you for being worried.

wow I loved the ending..... nice work

I agree it was very good.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=615645

heres the link to mine,
i wrote it quick though because im at school