Rating/Commenting on Poems

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Hello I'll r/r/c up to five at a time. I'd love it if you'd return the favor by commenting on some of my poems. Also if there are any other poems (more than five) that you would appreciate me reading, then you can tell me and I'll try to r/r/c them later on if I get a chance. Thank you ;)

    God Bless
    Saiya

  • Katrina Boblina
    20 years ago

    Hey check out Morbid Child, This is the House, My Life, Innocent Angel, and the White Box. I'll return the favor but not right now, time for supper:)

  • LadyPearl
    20 years ago

    love close yet far
    love untouched
    upon the shadows I have lived
    empty soul
    Nature's fire

  • BeeJay
    20 years ago

    "The fourth month of my life..."
    "Confused Heart"
    "Why Don't You have a heart?"

    And if you wanna, you can do more. Please and Thankyou in advance! :D
    ~BJ~

  • Lost & Delirious
    20 years ago

    Please read and comment on any of mine, I'll return the favor. Thanks. Hope you like them.

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Katrina--
    Very well written, all 5. Keep it up, and I am sorry for your experiences that you write about..

    Saiya

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Ashley--
    Beautiful. I love that you write about your experiences as well, and about the child.. I wish the best for you and your baby, whenever he or she shall be born.

    Saiya

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Noni--
    Amazing. I love it all! You have a great way with words, and your work it just beautiful. Keep it up!!

    Saiya

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    BJ--
    Heh, I've already read those three. I was Niki//Saiya, remember? No need to return favor, you already did I believe. Excellent work though. :)

    Best Wishes

    Saiya

  • katie!
    20 years ago

    Love it if you could read my latest ones.. thanks you, I will return the favour as soon as I can, please leave honest comments

    thanks

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    "I still Love you"

    "Blue Ink"

    "Universal Spell"

    "Emotional Pain"

    and

    "Lonely Mind"

    Thanks ahead of time M'Dear. =)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Gabriela--
    Nice job to you too :)
    I love your work

    Saiya

  • enfant du tordu chagrin
    20 years ago

    "Why do I still live?"
    "Take me to my hearse"
    "Forlorn Hope"
    "I Love you and it hurts"
    "Left Wondering"

    Thanks and I'll have a look at some of yours too.

    Dirk

  • Lost & Delirious
    20 years ago



    Thanks. XoXo. G.a.B.y.

  • HansRik
    20 years ago

    "Lachrymae Rerum"
    "The Immensity of Emptiness"
    "Ode to Autumn"
    "Valediction: On Time and Love (Part I)"

    Thanks in advance. I shall try to return the favour as soon as possible.

  • Andrea
    20 years ago

    Peanut Butter is Love
    God's Embrace
    Love For God

    and any others that catch your eye;)

    I'll read some of yours.

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Hey everyone, I'll work on rating and commenting your poems soon, I got to go now though.
    And Ashley, I'm glad you're keeping her :)

    God Bless

    Saiya

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Katie--
    Very nice poems, I enjoy your style. :) Keep on writing.

    Saiya

  • CinnamonTwirl
    20 years ago

    please! read my poem "imminent" it means a lot to me! ill return the favor of the poem of ur choice

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Atomic--
    WOW.... Amazing.. I don't know what to say other than beautifully written, AMAZING poems.
    Can't wait to read more. :)

    Best Wishes

    Saiya

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Dirk--
    Hey, nice job! I love your poems, they all have such a great smooth flow to them.

    Best Wishes
    Saiya

    The rest of you I'll get to either tomorrow or Thursday. Thanks for waiting everyone!

  • LadyPearl
    20 years ago

    Please read

    Still Searching...

  • Andrea
    20 years ago

    Peanut Butter Is Love
    God's Embrace
    Love For God

    Thanks and God Bless.