i'll return the favor(...in poems that is)

hey everyone, i've recently posted a few new poems, and if any of you could get a chance and read and comment on at least one, it would be greatly appreciated! i will do the same for you as well, on a poem or two of your choice! and if you have any poems you would like read and/or commented on, post them here, but please no more than two poems per person,(for right now.) thanks in advance! much love!