DDDDARK POEMS CONTEST #2

  • midnight♥lullibys
    18 years ago

    1.)No explict poems
    2.)No slang poems
    3.)Only English poems
    4.)No poems longer than 40 lines
    5.)I will be the judge
    6.)One poem per poet
    7.)Poems are judged by many factors
    8.)There will be many winners marked as 1st, etc
    9.)Poet must be author of poem
    10.) ENDS NOV. 1ST....JUDGING ON THIS DAY

    ps. ...if you do not follow these rules you will be deffinatly dq! please im looking for original different and creative...i love endings....

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    The Dark

    Do not fear the dark,
    Because the monsters fear it too,
    That's why they hide,
    That's why they jump out at you.
    Don't fear those nightmares,
    Hold them dear,
    And don't turn away from memories,
    They could tear you to pieces,
    Said the black-colored angel,
    Horns sprouting from her halo,
    Folding her hands,
    She stands,
    And turns her face from the light,
    She says goodbye,
    And she bites.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

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  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    A stabbing pain,
    A foreign breath,
    A new cry out,
    A shattered chest.
    Waiting and watching,
    Crying and screaming,
    Silence of heart,
    And broken dreaming.
    Brought to and front,
    By caressing touch,
    Trickling down,
    A beauty too much.
    Lost and alone,
    Staggered and cold,
    Tears and shadows,
    With lost hold.
    Blood and dagger,
    Spear and knife,
    Cup and poison,
    A potential life.
    A broken pulse,
    A screaming heart,
    A malice wished night,
    That tore her apart.

  • Amanda Bee
    18 years ago

    Disillusioned
    by: Amanda Bee

    I want you to touch me
    Stroke and caress me, ever so slow
    Put my hands into your hands
    And on a journey we will go

    I don't want you to touch me
    I just wish that you would go
    Why I am even with you
    The answer, I do not know

    Our life together will be a fairytale
    An unforgettable love story
    With days and nights of passion
    Featuring you and me

    I didn't think it would be this way
    A nightmare in disguise
    With days and nights of loneliness
    And teardrops in my eyes

    You make me feel so beautiful
    So precious and unique
    You make me feel so powerful
    Your charm and magnetism makes me weak

    You make me feel so repulsive
    So ugly through and through
    You make me feel disgusting
    So ashamed; can't even look at you

    You'll always be there for me
    With your arms around me tight
    I feel so safe and so secure
    As we cuddle through the night

    My bed is always empty
    Even though you are at home
    I feel so lost and so rejected
    So cold and all alone

    I want to tell you all my secrets
    And spend the rest of my life by your side
    To welcome you home in the evenings
    With my arms opened wide

    I want to tell you how much I hate you
    And spend the rest of my life telling the world
    Of how you destroyed my undying love for you
    And broke the heart of an innocent girl

    *This poem is dedicated to all the women
    who are with me in my loathing,
    for all those wicked, conniving “jesters”
    who dress up in “knight in shining armour’s" clothing.
    For every girl who has dreamed of a rescue,
    from a stallion riding knight,
    and who has found out that her fairytale’s ending
    has not turned out quite right.
    Which brings us dear ladies,
    to one disappointing conclusion,
    hold on tight to your hearts girls,
    or else you'll end up disillusioned*

  • midnight♥lullibys
    18 years ago

    come on ppl keep on postin!!

  • lostlllsoul
    18 years ago

    The dark path

    The moon is full
    And the time has come
    The souls will arise
    From their casket slums

    Above their tombs
    They scream in vain
    Squelching their bones
    To soothe their pain

    Bow down now dear child
    For Lucifer has occured
    Haven't you realised??
    The sensation will recur

    Let the Satan vex your mind
    With deadly and noxious thoughts
    Never try to escape
    For your efforts will be naught

    The dark path is where your souls will rest
    For the underworld has no end
    Now take your blade new souls
    Onto the path we'll descend!

  • midnight♥lullibys
    18 years ago

    few more days till closing

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

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  • Falling Up
    18 years ago

    MY FAULT

    You see perfection in all my flaws
    Yet you dont see, you are the cause
    Trying to hide them is like an addiction
    I bare the pain of my own Affliction

    You think my natural beauty is hidden,
    To bring out the truth, & whats real ...forbidden
    For me, its hard, a contradiction,
    I bare the pain of my own affliction

    You cant see something Ive masked so well
    So many dark secrets, which Ill never tell.
    Anything but Perfection, is my depiction
    I bare the pain of my own affliction

    You see perfection in all my flaws
    I Bare the pain of my own affliction

    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    This is a Kyrille Sonnet.... just to let you know...

  • Katie Bennett
    18 years ago

    (it really does sound better if you replace the curse words with ACTUAL curse words)

    Not Worth It

    Sometimes I wonder if life is even worth it
    If all the I have to be so God Dang freakin perfect
    I put on a mask, so the pain no one can see
    But inside, I'm torn up, and it's freakin killing me
    I try to stand tall, and act like I love life
    But now I'm putting down the gauntlet and picking up the knife
    I am but one person, I cant handle this all
    And because of this hurt, I will painstakingly fall
    Too much is asked, I cant take it anymore
    It's time I let my life, just shatter to the floor
    I dont want help, I'm too strong to ask
    But all I really want is to have my life back
    I'm tired of frontin' and hiding my pain
    I can't keep covering the slashes on my veins
    I can't handle this stuff, I am just too weak
    So with this blade in my hands, I fall to my knees
    I shudder as I slice and the blood just seaps
    But by doing this, my pain, I release
    I tried to please you, and just be so perfect
    But I've come to the conclusion, that life....just isnt worth it

    Katie bennett

  • ~â‚£ading |nspiration~
    18 years ago

    Cupid
    by ~Łost ₣airy~

    Who are you my dear friend cupid?
    Why are you so cruel and heartless?
    Or are you just a harmless creature,
    Who is too blind to even aim correctly.

    It seems to me that you love joking around,
    Always together with your bow and arrow,
    Going around searching for your next prey,
    Stringing together the heart of two souls.

    You stake an arrow through their chest,
    And pull away their heart and soul,
    Taking away the gift you're suppose to give,
    And destroying their world piece by piece.

    Now tell me now my dear friend cupid,
    Is this what you call love in the air?
    If it so why does they have to suffer,
    And go through those hardships instead of hilarity.

    Are you a Satan or are you a cherub?
    You can be as devilish as you are to some,
    Yet in the eyes of the lovers, you are their savior,
    But why is it, that I only see you as a villain?

    You are the reason that I became like this,
    No longer the cheerful girl everyone knows,
    But the girl who now shed bloods in her room,
    Just because you took her heart and soul away.

    © 2005 Fairies Collection

  • *Juicy_Secret*
    18 years ago

    The light that faded away.......

    The whisper is gone
    The night is still at last
    The silence has forsaken me
    Im alone on this path

    Wondering
    Praying
    Seeing
    The light that faded away

    Then i hear the forbidden song
    Of death talking, he found my tracks
    The light had abandoned me
    Im alone on this path

    Running
    Hiding
    No longer believing
    The light that faded away was me

    10/29/05

    Christina Chavez© Copyright 2005

  • Anthony
    18 years ago

    I'm Tired
    by †Anthony†

    This anger needs to be released,
    This is all I know how to do,
    The screaming inside my head,
    Here for everyone to see.
    I'm tired of the tears!
    Too many seen and shed for my lifetime,
    16 years on a planet,
    And your tears could fill a lake.
    I'm tired the pain!
    Everyday filled with aching memories,
    Everyday, longing to die.
    Giving up, no longer trying.
    I'm tired of feeling!
    Wishing, Praying, Hoping, Longing,
    Just to go numb and forget,
    Just to be free of these chains.
    I'm alone, and I'm scared,
    I'm hurt, and I'm weak,
    I'm still crying, and there's
    Still no one to hug me.
    No one can break my heart anymore.
    It's in pieces too small to divide.
    I'm tired of being afraid,
    Afraid to be alone,
    Afraid to live,
    Afraid to die,
    Afraid to say "I love you"
    I'm tired of feeling like I don't belong,
    But still, these feelings are trapped,
    Trapped inside me.
    No matter how much I write,
    They won't go away.
    For the first time I wish...
    Someone would stay,
    And I can lie in their arms,
    And feel... Like I'm safe.

  • midnight♥lullibys
    18 years ago

    first: adam detzner
    second: lost fairy
    third: falling up

    great poems!!!

  • ~â‚£ading |nspiration~
    18 years ago

    huh...I'm second? Oh...I can't believe this...that is actually my first dark poem...lol...and I seen many great poems here...they are all good...thank you...Yourfool...I'm really happy...