Daily Contest - 10/26/2005

  • Samantha
    18 years ago

    Don't post after the date on the thread, otherwise you're just wasting your time.

    Rules, you may ask?

    1. No slang.
    2. One poem per poet per day.
    3. Try to keep 'em short; don't repetedly post huge poems and expect me to read them all the way through.
    4. No explicit poems.
    5. Don't be offended by my final judgement.

    For each daily first place I will rate/comment on two of the winners poems, neither of which will have been that day's entered poem.

    Post away, ladies and gentlemen!

  • Angie
    18 years ago

    "Different Yet Same"

    We're short; We're tall,
    We're big; We're small,
    We're black; We're white,
    We're mean; We're nice.

    Together we live in this blue-green world,
    Together we experience what it holds.
    Together we smile; we laugh; we sing,
    Together we frown; we mourn; we weep.

    We're all so different, and yet the same,
    We stick together through thick and thin.
    As we journey through life, we start to understand....
    We're all so different, and yet the same
    We're just pawn pieces; in life's game....

    We're short; We're tall,
    We're big; We're small,
    We're black; We're white
    We're mean; We're nice.

    We're people, and this is how we are....

    ~Luvz~
    ~Chica~

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    This Dream By ItalianStallion

    I'm falling into this again
    this dream it seems that it just won't end
    makes me feel like it's all real
    that it will come true one day
    and I'll feel like this was all a big mistake
    that this dream was just all so fake
    but it really can come to life
    and i would be gone before your eyes

    and sometimes i feel like i am lost
    that i don't know what it would cost
    to pay the toll to fade away
    and figure it out some day
    but now i look the other ways
    to find out how i could make these days
    shorter so i can't complain
    cause these dreams are driving me insane

    and I'm falling into this again
    this dream it seems that it just won't end
    it makes me feel like it's all real
    that it will come true one day
    and I'll feel like this was all a big mistake
    that this dream was just all so fake
    but it really can come to life
    and i would be gone before your eyes

    cause all of this time I've been myself
    never was i somebody else
    so here i am with open ears
    waiting for something i want to hear
    but sometimes things don't go my way
    sometimes no one hears what i say
    but here i am alone in a dream
    without any self-esteem

    and I'm falling into this again
    this dream it seems that it just won't end
    it makes me feel like it's all real
    that it will come true one day
    and I'll feel like this was all a big mistake
    that this dream was just all so fake
    but it really can come to life
    and i would be gone before your eyes

    ~this is a song i wrote~

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    "How to keep yourself from crying"
    Just Rain

    I know how hard it is
    For some of us to stop crying
    To break down
    To feel pain plus nothing

    To try to have a heart made of steel
    But then find out life's real
    Oh would you dare call that the truth
    Or a lie?

    Could you stop someone you know from dying?
    No. It's God's will.
    So don't worry.They might have died with every trick in the book
    But it's not your fault so no need to cry
    Even if you didn't get to say that last goodbye

    Do you have some friends
    You miss every day
    And even more
    When you never get to talk?
    It happens to me too.
    You're not alone.

    You ever feel
    The weight of the world
    Is on your shoulders
    And you just want to break your back?
    Everyone feels that way.
    No one's perfect.

    Ever feel you can't summon what you need
    To push yourself up?
    To tell the truth?
    Do not worry.
    Almost the world has the same problem.

    Ever feel
    Like a broken toy
    That no one likes
    To play with?
    There's a toy repair guy,all the time
    Be a DIY (Do it yourself)

    You don't have to cry
    But this might make you:

    I know you feel this way
    Even though you won't admit it
    And you want to play
    Along with everyone else
    We all feel the same
    At some point
    We're all pushed away
    One time or another

    Don't worry
    Because now
    There's a reason to cry
    Because you have a life.

    If you believed the title
    Then I don't think you cried.

    Did you?

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    People laughing all over the Earth,
    Giggling and being jolly for everything they're worth.
    Inside of me, there is no laughter,
    It's summer outside, but in me it's winter.
    You turned your back,
    My soul became black.
    Now I have a hard time, just trying to smile,
    You've caused me to change my life style.
    I've lost my soul, it is gone!
    I feel alone and withdrawn.
    At night I spend hours just laying there crying,
    I feel like my insides are dying.
    Do you even care what you've done?
    Would you care if I jumped in the ocean?
    Would you cry, if I died?
    You'd probably just ditch me to look for a bride.
    In my heart I will ALWAYS love you,
    I know someday, you'll love me too.
    Until then, I'll lay here,
    I'll lay here year after year!
    I'll love you, even after I die, but you won't care,
    But until then, the pain I will bare.
    Someday you'll see, you'll love me too,
    Someday your love will be my rescue.

  • ~â‚£ading |nspiration~
    18 years ago

    Plz, plz, plz have faith in me.
    by ~Łost ₣airy~

    I can't change the person I am,
    No matter how much I want to,
    But do you think I like to stay this way,
    Being a jerk all the time,
    I don't,
    But I still can't change the fact that I am,
    Maybe not now,
    But I'll try,
    I may need a little time,
    To transform myself,
    From a little devil,
    To a pretty angel,
    So I hope you'll give me the chance,
    And believe in me,
    To change who I am.

  • Samantha
    18 years ago

    Today's winner was Italian Stallion.

    Due to lack of interest I think I'll make it an every other day thing.