Adam Detzner's Poetry Contest #2 - Short Poems

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    The inside of your soul

    In small words,you are beautiful
    To me,you are wonderful
    To my heart,you scream help
    But to my eyes,your soul sings in sweetness

    Which one are you?
    I ask myself
    Happy or sad?
    No one can have both...

  • ~â‚£ading |nspiration~
    18 years ago

    My Magical Friend
    by ~Łost ₣airy~

    How I wish I could be like the fairies,
    Flying freely around the world,
    Without people noticing them,
    Hiding beneath the old shady tree,
    Away from sadness and destruction.

    I know...this is short...lol...

  • Ann Stareyes
    18 years ago

    1. Love's Flame (Tanka)

    Life has memories
    That we hold so very dear
    Love fulfills our hearts
    Feelings that we keep so near
    Desire can set us on fire.

    2. Fighting This Battle

    I'll continue to fight this battle
    And all the tears within
    I'll try to fight these feelings
    Hoping one day they'll end.

    You truly won this battle
    When you set my heart free
    But my raging battle continues
    If you could see inside of me.

  • Shadows Collide
    18 years ago

    Inner Thought/ Fake

    I'm a sheep in wolfs' clothing,
    Full of fear and self-loathing,
    A gun with no trigger,
    Pretty useless I figure.

  • Falling Up
    18 years ago

    In a Dream

    Taking in a deep breathe of air,
    Relief that I can be in this place for a while,
    I breathe out, remembering I had to wake up
    This "perfect world" is the only place I smile.

    I would like to stay there forever;
    Id like forever to stay within me,
    A cold shadow of dark ran over this place
    Ruining my creation, which now I cant see.

  • Katie Bennett
    18 years ago

    Love Me Right

    Hold me tight And don't let go
    Ease this pain I can not show
    Caress my face So soft and warm
    Hide me from My own self harm
    Lay me down And love me right
    Finish the battle I dare not fight
    Win my heart It's yours for free
    Now stop pretending And just be with me

    Katie Bennett

  • Renee
    18 years ago

    Hospital Love

    And with her last breath, she whispered to death "don't let him follow me."

    And the IV machine sang a sad song, as she did a silent dance.
    Her heart beat stood still.
    He couldn't bare that last glance.

    So his fingers closed her eyelids,
    and he gently took her hand from his,
    and their lips met breifly for the last time...
    He could've -sworn- he felt those butterflies.

  • *Juicy_Secret*
    18 years ago

    A smile that says "I Love You"

    I don't want some one perfect
    Just some one to make me laugh
    I want a person I wont regret
    He would say I'm his other half

    I would never be lonely
    Everyday there's something new
    He would still be there to hold me
    Everyday his smile says "I Love You"

    10/28/05

    Christina Chavez© Copyright 2005

  • *Juicy_Secret*
    18 years ago

    IT BELONGED TO YOU......

    Long and linger without a thought,
    We met in the middle of a lip lock.
    Speechless and confused, my first kiss belonged to you,
    For me I'm in heaven, for you this makes a few.
    But this was a moment I will savor,
    For every kiss has a unique flavor.
    But I remember the one I shared with you,
    Everyone is different, now I've had my few.

    But I will always remember my first kiss ....
    ....It belonged to you

    02/24/03

    Christina Chavez© Copyright 2005

    (thank you for reading)

  • Samantha
    18 years ago

    Left-Handed Memory

    I still recall that single day
    Where, in bed, we both lay
    The light falls in from the window above
    Your bare skin glows from sun and love
    Blue eyes stare into my soul
    We embrace, and don't let go.

    The phone rings, startles me from my memory
    Life goes on, forever, without you and me.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    1.
    And every time,
    I look into your eyes,
    I get the greatest urge,
    To tell you all these lies.
    But I know I can not,
    For these lies are true,
    These lies are me,
    These lies are my views.

    2.
    Look around,
    To hollowed screams,
    Look around,
    To this place of dreams.
    Notice around you,
    What is around,
    Notice around you,
    What can be found.

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    These are spur of the moment poems...I wrote this in five minutes, so I"m aware they're not the best...but bare those facts in mind!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Please run this contest again someday..I'll take my time to write a better poem, just for you Adam dear. :)

  • Amanda Bee
    18 years ago

    Hold My Hand
    By: Amanda Bee

    Could you hold my hand for just a little while?
    This rickety breathing is beginning to slow down.
    Please hold on tighter to this cold, frail hand
    For surely there’s not much time left for me now.

    Spinning and shifting from this world to the next,
    There’s hardly even a moment to stop and look back.
    Yes please hold on a while longer, for I’m a bit scared
    As my existence begins to gradually fade to black.

  • SSSAAMMMYY
    18 years ago

    I cry every night
    I live in fright
    He took my life away
    Now I have to live in grief everyday
    I was only fourteen
    How could you be so mean
    It feels as though I can never be free
    Father, why did you have to rape me?

  • Tammy
    18 years ago

    FOREVER AND A DAY

    I want to love you, give you all that you desire
    Iwant to share with you all the happiness you inspire
    I want to hold your hand every moment that remains
    I want to see your face forever as I awake
    I want to hear your voice always call my name
    I want to love you forever & a day.

  • Tammy
    18 years ago

    TIME ALONE

    I cherish the times we have alone
    if we do nothing more than stay at home
    maybe watch a movie, eat chinese
    no other times are as precious as these
    running my fingers through your hair
    loving the hours that we share
    relaxing together, snuggling close
    these are the times I love most.

  • Feline Fatigue
    18 years ago

    The Shadow Dragons Dark Secret

    As darkness separates the night and day,
    the shadow dragon comes out of the clay.
    Silently soaring, searching for prey,
    it remains in the cover of shadowy play.
    The moon is out, he fears its ray,
    it must be quick if it is to slay,
    for the light will send him away,
    back to the clay.

    *I consider this my very first poem, so I thought it ironic that it's exactly the right amount of lines*

  • Samantha
    18 years ago

    It's tomorrow...:) I keep checking and rechecking to see if you've posted the results! I guess I'm so excited...You have a good contest here, my friend.

  • Tammy
    18 years ago

    It's ok Adam, everyone is busy. It's not a big deal.
    Take care & God bless.

  • Tammy
    18 years ago

    Adam,

    You might want to check Tara-Kay out.
    I found the following poem in another contest today.
    Also, if you look in *Poetry Contest*
    there is another one that Sammy busted her out on.

    I sent these links to Bob today.

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=521873
    "If I could have just one wish" Author: Tara-Kay

    http://www.romantic-lyrics.com/po1.shtml
    "One wish" Author: Erin Jane Doris Sabados

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Lol, I tried and failed once again. Ah, oh well.... Adam, I would be most obliged if you would read my newest poem. As I'm sure you can tell, I've had writers block for a long time, and finally it's gone....So please, grace me with your presense. :)

    And well done everyone!

  • Tammy
    18 years ago

    I would have to agree...Amanda's poem was awesome! I truly enjoy all of her work.
    Good choice Adam!

    I thought everyone did a good job.

  • Ann Stareyes
    18 years ago

    Congrats...Amanda....Beautiful poem...

  • ~â‚£ading |nspiration~
    18 years ago

    Oh Yeah...Amanda is truly gifted...she is good...and Adam...thanks for your advice..helps me to improve...

  • *Juicy_Secret*
    18 years ago

    A good thing about a contest is everyone is a winner even if not placed and i know my poems were ok and every else did a wonderful job you really dont need some to tell you your poem is good as long as it came from the heart thanks for reading my poems i call themn inspiration to someone elses soul ,live on ,keep trying ,never give up

  • Amanda Bee
    18 years ago

    Yea I won! I'm so happy and excited! Thank you so much Adam!!! And thanks everyone. All of your writings were awesome.

  • Katie Bennett
    18 years ago

    COPYRIGHTS ARE MINE MINE MINE!LOL. But, feel free to quote me. lol. And thanks for not letting me win :(