Want some feedback

Hey joE! I love cake btw and i would be happy I will do four of your poems if you do four of mine. here they are:

You I lack
Ocean Breeze
On my sleeve
The Girl By Your Side

Thnxs a ton xox.

heyz.. ill look at some of urz.. u can do as much as i did 4 u 4 me (i dunno how many im gonna be able to read :P)
nannoush

I'll check one of yours.

Would appreciate it if you check out "Universal Spell"

Thanks a bunch.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

ok so i commented on 2 of ur stuff..u r very good...

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