Anyone who wants honest opinions and comments!

-I dont' care...Any of my poems preferalbly my older ones plz if your going to be honest. THANX !!!-

-♥-Anarchy-♥-

I ♥ Cereal

Hi could you read "How Could I Say 'No'?" and "The Difference Between Rain And Tears"? These are my newest poems. Thank you!!

~Anthony

hi i've only just started writing .any comment will be appreciated
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Please comment on my "The Elegy of the Lovers." I will try to return the favour as soon as possible.

any of my recent ones,.. assimilation and/or trap-door veil.. thanx

I would love some constructive criticism... I'm sure I'm in need of it... My favorite is "Why Don't You Have a Heart?" and my most different for my style is "If Only..." If you could comment both of those, it would be greatly appreciated! And if you want to comment on more, I wouldn't object. Lol =P Thanksya muches in advance!

~BJ~

i just started writing while i was in iraq.
i just got back and any, i mean any criticism would be greatly appreciated.
if you could rate them as well i would appreciate it.
thx.

could you please tell me your opinion about my last poem"His warm embrace"?
thank you so much.

much love,
marjan

"Universal Spell"

"Blue Ink"

and

"Lonely Mind"

Thanks ahead of time M'Dear. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Thanx for the comment and I really appreciate you being completely honest! I like that! Thanksya muches :D

~BJ~

check out any of my newer poems..thanks

Please comment on:

Tell me
To my dear brother
Still loves him
Pray for my sister please

Thank you so much in advance

hi i would be truely gr8full 4 sum honest apinions read any mayb nanny
the man i called dad or random

yes plz, look at some of mine