New and Only Poem.

Hi… I'm new here lol. I only have the one up right now but I would like to get feed back on it:) Critique is very welcome. if u vote and give me a bad score please leave a comment on why and tell me what I should do to make it better I'm truly here trying to get better so give me what u honestly think, and tell me what u honestly think. If u think it rocks (Which I don’t think u will) u can leave a comment if u want lol. Anyways thank u and I hope to get more up and better at my poetry thanks:D

Alright... I just made a new one so now I have 2 but I would be very happy if u would please chek out both of them and Critique and comment and everything like I said before thanks much!

good job for your first and second..

thank u very much, and thanks for ur comments they help a lot:)