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  • Jamie
    20 years ago

    okay need help, you do this ONE poem (where im from) and i will do FIVE of yours

    remember "Where I'm From"

    i want critiques i'm not looking for "nice job keep writing" i want real comments it's for an english project and it's nowhere near done but i really would love suggestions so yeah...thankss

  • x-Beth-x
    20 years ago

    ok n/p sounds fair. just to make it more fair I'll do more than on of yours ok? great! ttyl

    -♥-Anarchy-♥-

  • Cherri
    20 years ago

    kk, I'm go'n!

    PEACE!

    -*-Cherri-*-
    =D

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    20 years ago

    i dun...that was gr8!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • CinnamonTwirl
    20 years ago

    hey Jamie, i responded but I like...send u a message personally cause it was mad long and stuff....

    ill suggest "Fighting Reality" and "Uncertainty"

    Good luck with ur assignment

  • NannO
    20 years ago

    hey.. ive done urz.. hope it was helpful to ya.. ge8 job with that poem.. nice work
    keep it up
    take care
    Nannoush

    p.s. gud luck with ur assignment

  • Jamie
    20 years ago

    okay i did all of yours i think, if i didn't let me know, thanks guys

  • xX-jess-Xx
    20 years ago

    i left u a caomment, great poem =D jesxx

  • Princess09
    20 years ago

    i would appreciate it if you r/r/c on:
    love of your life
    to murder your love
    someone's angel
    tear stained face
    my everything

    thanks a bunches
    XOXOXOXOXO
    ~~Sweetie

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    I can't find it!