My new... er poem.

  • Megadrive
    20 years ago

    its called *For those who think they know love…* and my other one *Mirror image...* it would be very helpful if someone could check out the 1st one though, and tell me their honest opinion... and Critique it, so as to help me out, so I can learn and get better=) please if u vote be fair lol. low votes please tell me what was wrong with it, high votes... please tell me why u liked it. and if u comment I will try and check urs out to=)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    I really liked both poems =)

  • ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ
    20 years ago

    me toooooooo...they are beautiful...
    if you can check out my 2 latest...

  • Megadrive
    20 years ago

    I tried to comment but everytime I tried it logged me out... stupid thing so.. uhh my advise on ur poems is use more ,.! and they sounded pretty good:)

  • Megadrive
    20 years ago

    Alright Lisa I tried to comment on urs to but stupid thing wouldnt let me... Gosh! anyways I read *Killing butterflies..* it was really good I liked how u used the ,.! for some odd reason I really like how those make the poem look and feel and I think they help the poem. anywyas it was geart keep up the good work!