I've completed part1 of my masterpeice

Please read
Ruby Red Jewel; A Histery.
This is part one to a short series I will be writing. It only rymes in the beggining. It is a little long, but after you read it, then you'll know if the series interests you or not. I'm simply looking to entertain people. All I want you to do is rate it, so I'll know how it's doing and if I should improve it or not. I hope you like it! Oh, and you don't have to comment, but if you do, i'll return the act.

I'm not sure when I'll even get a chance to start writting it. I don't get much time on the computer since I was grounded, but I will try to get it down as soon as I can. I'll guess that it'll be done within two weeks, unless I write it tonight, which is unlikely. ;)