Need Comments

I have posted a few new poems that haven't gotten much attention...I'll give one comment for everyone I get...So yeah.

Thanks in advance...And just a warning, my computer usage is very irradic. So I may not get to you right away. But I promise I will get to you.

Who knows, I may have the time tomorrow to get caught up. Hopefully that's the case.

Ill do one =)

Well, I got one from my1&only....

And I'm online for a long time today so I'll be able to give comments quickly...

Alright for some odd reason it wont let me comment:( but I did read *Foolish* which is a REALLY great poem, only advise is to try using more commas, periods and Exclamation points other then that its great!
Could u please check out *Go deeper...* thank u much!

Okay.

Hey, guys, I had some immature poet go through and rate all my poetry 1's....So my rating is quite a bit lower than it was before (I didn't really have many votes so that's why it was lowered)...

I'd really appriciate some comments and votes, and now I'm willing to double all that you give me.