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hey, can u comment on some of mine? i'll comment on yours also... thanks a ton!

I'll comment on three of yours if you will do the same for me...thanks...

Please check out *Go deeper...* thanks bunches I shall check urs out=D

Alright I did read a couple of them but the dang site keeps logging me out when I click on ur poem=( I'm sry I did try to comment... I did vote though lol... I think ur poems r really good... maybe just add some commas and periods. Those give the read a beat and u can make some words more dramtic and stuff so yeah thats my only advise lol.

newest two, thanks