Sinking heart...

Hello I wrote a poem, and just posted it. It's called *Sinking heart...* please check it out and give me some Critiquing. If u vote high please tell me why u liked it, and if u vote low please tell what u didnt like and what needs work. Also please remember this is like my 1st story/poem I have done, so please dont be to harsh... that being said I will try and read everyone who checks out mine. Thank u so much!

~Megan~