PLEASE COMENT OR VOTE

please comment and/or vote on my new poem "To Explain Love" its mean alot i know its not my best poem but i'd still like to know your thoughts thanks alot! and if you want check out some of my other poems too.
thanks again,
Mollie

Sry I cant comment on the poem itself because the site logs me out when I click on it… Grrr! I thought it was really nice (I dont think it deserves a 2.5 I think its much better then that!) I suggest more commas and periods because u have like... none in that poem! Here is an example

Your telling me you love me
and you've said it many times
but this time im stairing quietly
and your gazing in my eyes

Edited version

You’re telling me, you love me,
and you've said it many times.
But this time, I’m staring quietly,
and you’re gazing in my eyes.

It makes it sound more… dramatic. Also remember to capitalize your I’s when they stand alone lol. The caps just make your poem look nicer, the periods help the reader know when the sentence is over, the Commas give your poem a rhythm, that way the reader can get more into the poem. Commas also help make some words more powerful then others, makes them stand out more. They are a helpful piece that not many people apparently use, but I like them lol, I think they make the poem just that much better and of course nicer looking. Other then that little thing Good Job!

~Megan~