My new poem: *Sinking heart...*

Hey everyone I have my newest poem up and I would love some Constructive Criticism pretty please lol its called *Sinking heart...* Please r/r/c. If you rate high please tell me what you liked about it, and still please tell me how I can improve, if you rate low please tell me what you didnt like and what needs to be done. Thank you very much. I will also try and read 1 or 2 poems of everyone that checks out mine and r/r/c Thank You so much!!!

~Megan~

ok I will read rate comment if you do the same