Somewhere to request honesty

You read the title so you know what to do.

Request only 2 poems each please.

Just so you know I will comment from a poetical view, and I won't be less harsh just because your poem is sad and true. Please keep this in mind, and don't ask for comments on any poem that is very personal or delicate to you.

Thanks.

"daddy1"
"save me from me"

thanks! jesx

Hey Jess I've left you some feedback. Keep writing.

thanx alot! the advise was great! jesx

Please comment on:

Help her
I will be alright

thank you so much in advance

BleedingAngel - I've left you some comments...Keep writing.

Could you comment on my latest one, I need some honest critiquing done, thanks.

Oh, could I ever use some honesty. "Girl with two tongues" and "The answer" please. Thank you tons.