Want Honest Comments?

  • N J Thornton
    20 years ago

    Well I'm here to give them.

    Leave up to 3 poem titles and I'll do my best to r/r/c them all honestly.

    There is no catch either because you only have to return the favour if you feel it truly necessary.

    NOTE: If you have any poems that are particularly sensitive to you DO NOT post the titles here because I will be honest even if they are very sad and true. You have been warned.

    Thanks.

  • AJ
    20 years ago

    If you want can you check out Driven To Kill, I need some honest critiques, thanks.

  • N J Thornton
    20 years ago

    Lovely and Death Mask -
    I have left honest comments on all poems you left the titles for. I hope it helps.

  • Tara Kay
    20 years ago

    sex
    My friend (Sarah)
    Death's Door

    Cheers I'll return the favour

  • N J Thornton
    20 years ago

    Tara- I left comments on all three poems, I hope my suggestions are helpful.

  • Drew Gold
    20 years ago

    Snowflake Perpetuous

  • N J Thornton
    20 years ago

    Drew - Good work, I've left you a comment.

  • AJ
    20 years ago

    Thanks for the comment Silver.

  • x-Beth-x
    20 years ago

    I still love them, Just another Girl, and I've Finally Found How thanx !!!

    .:yourdirtysecret:.

  • Truest Lies
    20 years ago

    Yay! On Spider Web, Nighttime Seagull and Healthy.

    thanks so much in advance!
    beth

  • aaron 1 remo
    20 years ago

    urm december and snake cheers mate (be as brutaly honest as you want it's the only way i'll get better)
    aaron

  • BeeJay
    20 years ago

    "A Letter From Your Soul"
    "Why Don't You Have A Heart?"
    and
    "Free At Last"

    If you wish to do more, it would be greatly appreciated. Thanksya muches in advance and I hope you like them.. I look forward to your honest comments :)

    ~BJ~

  • Lucy Loves Not
    20 years ago

    any one or two of my poems would be greatly appreciated.

  • N J Thornton
    20 years ago

    .:yourdirtysecret:., elizabeth(beth), Serena Lee, Zjea, Remo, ShhhhItsASecret©, Lucy Loves Not – I have left comments on all poems that you requested.

    Anyone else is still welcome to post titles for honest critique.

  • StormyWeather
    20 years ago

    I'm sorry I don't Understand
    Emotionally Confused
    Patterns in the snow

    Thanks for your time, i'd be glad of an HONEST critique for once :D

    A.A.O

  • libby
    20 years ago

    the answer
    girl with two tongues
    exorcism

    Thank you! Be brutal if I need it, please!

  • aaron 1 remo
    20 years ago

    thanx very much very appreicieated and helpful

  • Megadrive
    20 years ago

    ok yeah I like any help so here they r
    *The Shallow Pool…*
    *Sinking heart…*
    *Go Deeper…*

    I have only one more so if u wanted to look at it, its called *The Round Table…* But I already know that one sucks lol. Anyways thanks so much!

    ~Megan~

  • Jessica
    20 years ago

    Hey silver, please rate and comment on my poems
    * You never expect the unexpected* *God...* and *That was then...This is now* please be honest. I can take it. The first 2 are about greif and the last one is about love. There are all fairly short.
    Thanks so much

  • Samantha
    20 years ago

    hey silver!
    could you please rate and comment on my poems
    My Dearest Brother,
    I Love You Ok?, and
    I Cant Live Without You

    thank you soo much!!!
    sammie

  • Michelle
    20 years ago

    Please check out the new poem I've posted: Miss Me - But Let Me Go ... Author Unknown....and my poem: Please Hold Me Tight....

    Thanks!

    Michelle

  • Richard
    20 years ago

    heyy
    if u could do Machine Mafunction and any other 2 that would be awesome thx