Want Honest Comments?

Well I'm here to give them.

Leave up to 3 poem titles and I'll do my best to r/r/c them all honestly.

There is no catch either because you only have to return the favour if you feel it truly necessary.

NOTE: If you have any poems that are particularly sensitive to you DO NOT post the titles here because I will be honest even if they are very sad and true. You have been warned.

Thanks.

If you want can you check out Driven To Kill, I need some honest critiques, thanks.

Lovely and Death Mask -
I have left honest comments on all poems you left the titles for. I hope it helps.

sex
My friend (Sarah)
Death's Door

Cheers I'll return the favour

Tara- I left comments on all three poems, I hope my suggestions are helpful.

Snowflake Perpetuous

Drew - Good work, I've left you a comment.

Thanks for the comment Silver.

I still love them, Just another Girl, and I've Finally Found How thanx !!!

.:yourdirtysecret:.

Yay! On Spider Web, Nighttime Seagull and Healthy.

thanks so much in advance!
beth

urm december and snake cheers mate (be as brutaly honest as you want it's the only way i'll get better)
aaron

"A Letter From Your Soul"
"Why Don't You Have A Heart?"
and
"Free At Last"

If you wish to do more, it would be greatly appreciated. Thanksya muches in advance and I hope you like them.. I look forward to your honest comments :)

~BJ~

any one or two of my poems would be greatly appreciated.

.:yourdirtysecret:., elizabeth(beth), Serena Lee, Zjea, Remo, ShhhhItsASecret©, Lucy Loves Not – I have left comments on all poems that you requested.

Anyone else is still welcome to post titles for honest critique.

I'm sorry I don't Understand
Emotionally Confused
Patterns in the snow

Thanks for your time, i'd be glad of an HONEST critique for once :D

A.A.O

the answer
girl with two tongues
exorcism

Thank you! Be brutal if I need it, please!

thanx very much very appreicieated and helpful

ok yeah I like any help so here they r
*The Shallow Pool…*
*Sinking heart…*
*Go Deeper…*

I have only one more so if u wanted to look at it, its called *The Round Table…* But I already know that one sucks lol. Anyways thanks so much!

~Megan~

Hey silver, please rate and comment on my poems
* You never expect the unexpected* *God...* and *That was then...This is now* please be honest. I can take it. The first 2 are about greif and the last one is about love. There are all fairly short.
Thanks so much

hey silver!
could you please rate and comment on my poems
My Dearest Brother,
I Love You Ok?, and
I Cant Live Without You

thank you soo much!!!
sammie

Please check out the new poem I've posted: Miss Me - But Let Me Go ... Author Unknown....and my poem: Please Hold Me Tight....

Thanks!

Michelle

heyy
if u could do Machine Mafunction and any other 2 that would be awesome thx