JUST VOTE ??

  • BeautifulDisaster
    20 years ago

    Could someone please just vote on my poem Do you or Don't you :) It'd mean a lot, you dont have to comment

  • Megadrive
    20 years ago

    I voted, it was really good!
    My advise would be to not use so many rhymes like *Me, See, Be, You, To* cause their... everywhere... this is the same advise I got to... and I have noticed when u use harder rhyming words... the Poem seems to be much more powerful. And it shows u put time and thought into it. I would have commented on the poem... but the site logged me out when I clicked on it... sry:(