Take a Look, Please?!

I have so many new poems up there, and I know that to be complaining yet is a lil impatient but even one of myolder poems is being left alone. I've set myself a goal to practice writing on here so I can become the journalist on my school, but I was hoping to get some critiques on my style before I did that... Can someone please check out some of my poems, there are 5 that have no comments, and I hate to begg or sound winy, but it's important to me -and I have to choose if I want the journalist thing really soon... Thanks for listening atleast guys - talk toyou all later.

sure ill take a look. if u can return the favor that would be great.

Ruby