I'll read and comment your poems...

hey guys... I've read a lot of good poems on this site so far... if you want me to read and comment on yours leave the titles here and I'll check them out as soon as possible...

sammie

Machine Malfunction and any other looking interesting ones ud like to comment thx

"Love At First Sight"

Please and thanksya muches in advance!

~BJ~

The Judas Kiss.
From Weak to Strong.
Dance of Life.
I would appreciate your comments, thank you.Lyn

I'm Not That Good In Person

and any of me newer ones or ones that noones commeneted on as of yet. thanx

i would appreciate it if u would please comment and vote on 4 of my poems...

"bye to you...hello to him"
"you changed me"
"sentimientos/feelings(english)"...its all in english
"with you by my side"

thank you in advance

okay i think i got at least one from everyone finished... for those who asked me to read and comment on two or more i will get to them asap... they have all been great so far... keep it up... anyone else want me to read theirs?

sammie

I just added a new poem, so if you could check it out I would really appreciate it!
Thanks a lot!
Tiffany.xox.

hey i have so many new ones and even some old ones that don't have very many (or no) comments and votes... mind helpin' me out? I'll check some of urs and other ppl on here aswell, just so the favour works both ways :) thanks lots

Could you please rate / comment any of my poems but preferably Garden of Lost Hope, Forever Untill the End? But any is fine, thank you^_^

"Broken Hearts"

Runaway,
I found the place where i belong,
stranger,
Win my heart.

Thanks in advance
Tara-Kay xxxx

wow guys your great... sorry it took me so long to get to them but i was busy yesturday... but i'd really like to read more so if you guys want me to check your poems out let me know put your titles here:

thanks a bunch...

sammie

anymore???let me know...

Sleep's Menacing Side

please check it out and thank you in advance

alright i've finished those ones... anyone else need comments??

come on guys.... give me some new ones please??

JDBackwords-

I went back and looked at your poem again and noticed that you have added a summery about your poem. After reading it I went back and reread your whole poem and noticed it makes much more sence with that information... I think it was more confusing for people to read without that background because right off the bat we didnt excatly know what you were trying to talk about... but it made so much more sence now... But the summery was a good idea... it gave a clearer message... so good job...

If you have time JDBackwords you could check out some of my poems... it dosent matter which one... but you dont have to... im perfectly happy just reading everyone elses.. haha... it lets me see how i can improve sometimes... yeah but thanks...

sammie

any of mine would be great

but if u could read "the cave" id apresiate it

Thanks in advance

hey, thnX for the offer..! :D

uhm... My supersweet suicide please.. :) or any will do acctualy :)

alright i'm done with those ones... nice job everyone so far!! some i have added to my favorite list... soo keep it up!! anyone else???

sammie

any others?

Well... since you asked... lol. I would love it if you could take a look at and critique any of the ones I have featured. Thank you!

Would appreciate any comments / advice about any one of my poems. I've not written many but they've all been from real experiences of my own. The ones posted here are the least specific of them. Thanks

alright i need so new ones to look at... haha... im done with all the other ones.. they were great!!!

sammie

~Where to find my poems~

~SAD POEMS~

~About Death Poems~
*The Letter
*Closed Casket

~Depression Poems~
*medication
*why? and when?
*I dont understand
*life after death
*dont get attached

~LOVE POEMS~

~Lost love~
*you where my one and only
*just love me

~Desired love~
*where were you?

~EXPLICTED POEMS~

~Profanity~
*We fucking loved you

~rape stories~
*I didnt have the ability to say no

~Drugs/Alcohol~
*they help
*my life

Any of my poems would be helpful. I'll return the favor asap!!
Please and thank you
~~Sweetie

alright... i'm done with those... leave me so more guys... i cant get over how amazing all of these poems are...

sammie

i'll be here for the next hour... just post your titles here and i'll check them out in the order they are posted

sammie