X-mas Without Presents

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    Hi, I'm making a contest now. It must be based on, or about...Christmas without presents!

    Okay, the rules are...

    You must be the author of the poem
    No explicit, erotic, violent-ness.
    Contest ends Dec. 18.
    There will only be one winner, who will get a short Christmas story written by me, delievered by e-mail before Christmas.
    I am the only judge of this contest.
    No more than two poems per poet.
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    Okay, Merry X-mas Everyone! Have fun!

    -beth

    *********Scroll to the bottom for a little teaser of the story. Although I haven't mentioned it yet, the story is about Christmas, although also about spying and some ALIAS type action...
    Okay, please submit some poems!!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    Frost among the window of my room,
    There is a sence of joy, happiness, and gloom.
    The alarm clock buzzes, but I'm already awake,
    Because it's christmas, and presents are at stake.

    I run down the stairs, being careful not to fall,
    However at the bottom of the stairs, I do stall.
    I run to the tree, hoping I'm wrong,
    This can't be the day I've been waiting for, for so long.

    I go through the presents one by one,
    But a frown has come to my face, that's replaced the sun.
    I read the cards, attached to each,
    But none to me, have I been impeached?

    There is nothing to me, everyone else opens joyful,
    Everyone smiling and hugging, and beings thankful.
    Except for me, I sit in the corner and cry,
    Has everyone forgot about me, did I die?

    I say, hey what about me?
    They say oh we forgot, sorry.
    The day goes by, not a present in sight,
    That isn't unwrapped, and now it is night.

    The company leaves, with a hug and a kiss,
    I guess that I'll never know just what I missed.
    So I head off to bed, with a tear in my eye,
    I forget the sugarplums dancing, as I let out a sigh.

    Yes, I know this is bad, but I've never written a poem about christmas before...lol

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • Afraid of the Dark
    18 years ago

    A CHRISTMAS WITHOUT PRESENTS.

    It melted like the snow,
    On that Christmas day,
    The pleasure of a child,
    From where the presents lay.

    For on that very spot, where
    The tree did used to be,
    Lay nothing but a hat,
    And a child’s thwarted plea.

    “But where are all the presents Mommy?
    Where have they all gone now?
    They were under the tree Mommy,
    By the lowest bough.”

    Her mother shook her head,
    And took her by the hand,
    “The tree was never there dear,
    Nor the presents grand.”

    Every little scrap of paper
    Every shiny bow,
    Had never even been there,
    But from her mind did grow.

    Every year, of that child’s life,
    Santa never came,
    He never brought the presents grand
    But left her there in shame.

    Laura XxX

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    The hollow flame of christmas
    is but a memory
    suspended in the wind;
    unanimated and sore.

    a discordant lullaby
    self-seething
    and unsettling to the touch.

    resonating within
    the emptiness
    a frost-bitten chill
    no amount of soothing
    could thaw.

    and in all my selfishness,
    not once did i wonder
    if maybe,
    it wasn't
    meant to be felt
    like it was
    and did
    that first time.

  • Void
    18 years ago

    I got a letter the other day,
    from santa clause himself.
    I thought I'd knew just what he'd say,
    So I stuck that letter on top of the shelf.

    Being the best girl I possibly can,
    I walk around with a smile.
    Helping momma, sister and dad,
    We're settin' up presents, in a small pile.

    The christmas tree is standing tall,
    Dressed in ornaments and lights.
    The tinsel shines like a silver shawl,
    Our family will gather 'round it tonight.

    Atleast that's what our plans were,
    Before things had gone wrong.
    Instead we are thinking of ways to cure,
    These flames with a family christmas song.

    We watch our house burn to the ground,
    No presents left to shake.
    But even with this tragedy, I've found,
    That I need no presents to take.

    I'm greatful for the things I have,
    Even though my home is gone,
    And when my family waits in a cab,
    Never has our love so brightly shone.

    In the morning, we'll have no gifts
    But I'll have everyone by my side,
    With that thought, my heart lifts
    There's no sorrow left to subside.

    Hey, I never actaully thought of writing about that experience, but I spose it worked out alright. Hope you like it.

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    Okay, thanks everyone for submitting.
    Anyone else?
    Just a few more entries, and I will begin writing my christmas story.
    Oh, and a few more days and I'll give you a little piece of it...just to get some enthusiasm.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    What it must feel for a Jewish kid (or Jehovah Witness)

    As I see all of these Christmas trees, so beautiful and touching
    I also feel cold Winter's breeze which ought to be worth loving
    I can see lights through people's windows, and I look at mine
    To see them with no Christmas decorations
    Sometimes when this happens I want to cry
    It's such an irritation

    I remember so very long ago
    I received a Christmas present for the first time
    And now I'm not allowed to even celebrate
    If only truth could lie

    Truth is, daddy won't let me
    He says it's very, very bad
    "You can't do Easter or Halloween"
    But missing Christmas makes me sad
    For Christmas is supposed to be
    Where you huddle up by the fireplace
    Drink hot cocoa, open presents
    Have family and friends put a smile on your face

    Even if there weren't presents, I still would want to go
    Visit auntie's house, paint some mugs, I wish someone would know
    How I yearn to have a celebration
    Not work hard and get nothing in return
    Christmas... to celebrate Jesus' birth
    If not that, then what's it worth?

    I already have a family
    Which so many letters to Santa ask for
    I have many friends that care for me
    Whom I do adore
    I guess Christmas is supposed to be fun
    But what about me?
    For I do not get materials
    Or even a Christmas tree
    Even though I have the things that count
    I always think things could get better
    If only someone else thought the same
    If they opened one of my Christmas letters

    I know what it's like to be a Jewish kid
    Or a Jehovah witness
    I tell you, daddy's both
    He just won't admit it
    He celebrates Thanksgiving
    Only 'cause we force him
    He makes life not feel like living
    Like surviving on a whim

    I like Christmas, I really do
    I just wish I had something to give
    I guess that right now I should be greatful
    Just to live

    If I could make a wishlist
    I'd ask not to even be close to poor
    To have nice clothes, an MP3 and oh so much more
    Others don't know how lucky they are
    To just own a cat
    Mommy says I can't have pets
    What's the use of that?

    I wish one day I could have a Christmas
    Without daddy making me look like a Jewish kid
    'Till then I'll pretend to be happy
    Just like I always did
    I'll still get those used presents
    That my friend's sister didn't want
    I wish I had a Christmas
    Without it being gone...

  • libby
    18 years ago

    I wish I could buy you the world, my dear,
    but I just can't afford it all this year.
    Nothing cheap is good enough.

    You're at the age now that you can understand
    that we do what we must, we do what we can,
    but the dollars never quite add up.

    You're one of those that the magic never leaves,
    but you curse as you hang the lights on the tree,
    and you cry as your boots crush the snow.

    Try to sink into your friends, have to hear them talk
    of what they'll be getting, and what they've got,
    and you're stuck with nowhere to go.

    It's not that they won't give you things, they're unable,
    and you think of the poor boy born in a stable...
    money won't buy his love.

    Then you remember frankencense, myrrh and gold,
    even he was showered with gifts of old.
    Where's the humility they all speak of?

    But this will pass, as all things do,
    and you'll never forget what you've been through,
    it will help you in the end.

    That's probably not what you want to hear,
    but I'll say it again, I'll say it clear,
    this Christmas, you at least have a friend.

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    Great poems everyone!

    Harrumph...come on, doesn't anyone want a Christmas story?

    Oh well...

    -beth

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    It was strange, finding out that your mum was a top secret agent, a part-time spy and right now living in a prisoner's base, surrounded by guards...maybe even torturing devices--

    Amanda woke up so suddenly she slammed her head on the top bunk of her sister's bed as she rocketed away from the covers, dragging the sheets with her in a vain attempt to get away from her dreams.
    She'd been having nightmares ever since the man in the black jacket had visited their house and explained to the two sisters why their mother had been missing for two days.
    Emily hadn't taken the news very well, bursting into tears and running upstairs. Outwardly, Amanda had attempted a brave face, a plastic smile and a curt farewell, but inside she had been suffering.
    She should had known that her mother was up to something, with the slamming and sudden hiding of books and folders whenever Amanda ventured into a room, and the stiff, elegant clothes stashed at the back of the cupboard...of course, they had been armour.
    Of course, she hadn't been going to the library or grocery store those times that she ran out without giving a proper explanation. She had never returned with a book, or a bag of food...

    "Again?" said Emily, peering over from where she had been awoken.
    "Yes, just the same," answered Amanda. She paced the room, thinking over all the times she should have asked what was happening, and she never had.

    "Em?"
    "Yeah?"
    "Is mum alive, do you think?"
    "You better believe it, sis. Our mum is a fighter. Are you going to go back to sleep now?"
    "No, not just yet," said Amanda. In her head, an impossible plan was forming.
    But she couldn't let Emily know.
    Well, not just yet anyway.

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    Okay, this a brief piece of the story.
    The winner gets the whole lot.
    Start submitting!

    -beth

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    I thought it was a rather nice subject...

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    i like this subject...n i wrote on it...n if i could force other ppl 2 rite on it..im sure they wood...just wait...im sure more ppl will post soon....lol

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    The winner is Steph. Great poem

  • Void
    18 years ago

    *happy* thanks lots!!! Nice poems everyone!