The best poetry contest

  • Void
    18 years ago

    ... You mean 'about your girlfriend or boyfriend' as in, what they look like/act like, who they are...? Or do you just mean about them, like, you wrote the poem for them and stuff...? lol I think I'm worrying to much, but I want to be sure before posting something and taking the chance at looking like a total retard *blush* . hehe.

  • ShadowDancer
    18 years ago

    my saviour

    Before you found me
    I was alone and lost
    you saved me from the cold
    that icy winter frost

    you protect me from all
    you know what to do
    you love me for what I am
    I feel healed through and through

    before you came to me
    I was as empty as a shell
    But you filled me up
    And I want to help you as well

    the stars in the sky
    those heavenly lights
    are nothing compared
    to your spirit, so bright

    the sun that shines down
    and warms my smooth skin
    is nothing compared
    to the warmth you stirred within

    the moon in the night
    a bright jewel in the sky
    is nothing compared
    to the light in your eyes

    the clouds that glide by
    like balls of cotton, heavenly
    are nothing compared
    to your softness with me

    I love you so much
    You filled me right up
    You loved me and cared
    You lifted me up

    I love you

    My Saviour

  • Void
    18 years ago

    A Deeper Appearance... (brand new, made like 10 minutes ago especially for this contest :). Good luck to all)

    Warm strands in your eyes,
    Of comforting brown.
    Love that shines through,
    Enchants without sound.

    The smile that forms,
    Lights up a room.
    Lips assume position,
    As your dimples bloom.

    Dark brown hair,
    That sprouts short from your head.
    Runs through my fingers,
    As you lie asleep in your bed.

    The length of your arms,
    That hold me tight.
    The strength that protects,
    With no need to fight.

    The look that can make
    Any heart melt,
    Is the look that you give me,
    When true love is felt.

    Everything so perfect,
    From your head to your toes.
    Through to the inside,
    From your heart to your soul.

    When I look at you,
    I see the night sky.
    I feel our first kiss.
    And I hear love's cry.

    Our hearts forever joined,
    We were meant to be.
    When I look at you,
    That is what I see.