Teary Eyes

  • Sherry Lynn
    20 years ago

    Please critique my poem called Teary Eyes... I will gladly return the favor.

    I want honest critiquing though, good job or nice write only will not help me improve.

    Thanks everyone
    --Sher

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  • alwaysremeniceus
    20 years ago

    okie :) like i said, i think your poem was extremely expressive, its like i could feel or see the pain...

    -kelsie

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  • Sherry Lynn
    20 years ago

    Thanks

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  • Jerry Scott
    20 years ago

    good work!

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  • Sherry Lynn
    20 years ago

    Thanks guys ...

    --Sher

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  • Sherry Lynn
    20 years ago

    KORI: Left you another messege... sorry about the mix up babe.

    --Sher

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  • nobody truly knows me
    20 years ago

    ok, i'll read it.

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  • Sherry Lynn
    20 years ago

    Ok I think I got everyone so far thanks guys. Sorry it took me so long to get caught up...

    --Sher

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  • Sherry Lynn
    20 years ago

    Anyone else?

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  • Puerto_Rican_Chick
    20 years ago

    i read it and very good.

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  • Sherry Lynn
    20 years ago

    Thanks... caught up

    --Sher

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  • Sherry Lynn
    20 years ago

    Anyone else?

    --Sher

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  • Michael D Nalley
    20 years ago


    LOVED YOUR POEM

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