need more comments and votes??

Sounds like a good deal to me! Well, I'll the only poems I really want some feedback on are my latest ones. I don't have alot on them, :
A Deeper Appearance
and
Devil's Puppet

I am usually always doing love poems, but I thought that for a while I should try some new things... And apperantly I was only capable of one dark one for now, and I don't even know what to think of it really. It's short and sweet though no worries :P... Well, other than that you can choose if you want to read a third, you certainly don't have to though. It's very much appreciate :) I'm happy to check out a few of yours and I'll be on my way now....

hey, it will only allow me to comment on one of your poems. I have read and tried tocomment on 'No more hugs' like a million times now,and I'm only signed back out when I try to do it. (you'll see my posts around the site looking forhelp with this problem) but I just wanted to say:
Hey, I really liked that one too. As sad as it was, I really liked the ending to it. If you are infact saying sorry for it, then you came off incredibly sincere and I'm sorry for your loss. And if this was simply a poem that came to your mind to write down - then it's very well done. Shows alot of remorce and feeling. I liked it alot :)...

lol that's what i've been trying to comment. It's not much criticism I know, but that's because I didn't think it needed it. I'm very sorry I can't post it! I don't even know what is going wrong here *sigh*.

murder or suicide
love is where you are
your the reason

thanks will return the favour to anyone who comments & votes
love
amy