i hate people vote and don't comment

my new poem "Angel Wings" has a 3.7, and I don't disagree with the voting I just wish they'd leave advice or tell me where I went wrong........so if you leave a comment, critisicm really appriciated, i'll do 3 of your choice, thanks

I read yours and commented! You can choose any of three of mine...it doesn't matter which! :)

Hey, I really liked it. It is filled with feeling and really nice to be able to connect to. But there is one thing I didn't quite like, it did over all have a pretty good rhythm, but some of your counts per line were off which took away from the smoothness of the rhythm. For example this line (the second line has many more syllables than the first.)

So I'll keep you with me as long as I can
I know that I'll bleed when things don't go according to plan

Anyway, I hope you get what I mean. But other than that I think you deserve a better rating than the one you have. Good Job!!!

^^ that is what I've been trying to post for the past 30 minutes, but everytime I tried to post it I was signed out again. So I'm really sorry I can't actaully comment, I did vote. And I understand that it's frusterating to get voted like that with no comment, so I thought I'd just post it here. I really liked it though, and no need to check out my poems if you don't want to as this isn't exactly returning the favour... Happy Holidays!

thanks guys, ill try editing it a little

hey, i loved it. could you do broken, my guardian angel, and too late? thanks in advance.
**lisa**