I'll return the favour...

Well, one of my poems has absolutely no comments on it and I was hoping to get some more people's thoughts on it, see if I should fix anything or improve anywhere. It's called:

A Deeper Appearance

I promise to return the favour, no matter how many poems you leave comments on I will return the same (or more if you impress me ;) ) Thanks lots to everyone on the site, you've taught me alot. Happy holidays, Keep your chin up and keep writing away!!!